tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2659026536331999061.post2911655204444998966..comments2023-06-24T03:33:29.854-07:00Comments on Summer Haiku 2009: Rachel Greenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13048590167153841615noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2659026536331999061.post-89690401810171037202009-08-12T08:59:22.868-07:002009-08-12T08:59:22.868-07:00Thanks for the comments, and yes I did have a nice...Thanks for the comments, and yes I did have a nice time, but didn't want to limit the proto-haiku to be just that.<br /><br />I'm still not happy with this poem and it isn't a haiku yet, but glad I had a couple of goes at it.<br /><br />Sometimes these things work, sometimes not. It won't be going into any magazine though. ;-)<br /><br />AlanArea 17https://www.blogger.com/profile/07472190637554124160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2659026536331999061.post-52822126292807563382009-08-12T05:28:02.338-07:002009-08-12T05:28:02.338-07:00Happiness was in the air. I can feel it, Alan.Happiness was in the air. I can feel it, Alan.Wahyu W. Basjirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04260428377205211034noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2659026536331999061.post-31168754812539518022009-08-11T08:33:07.338-07:002009-08-11T08:33:07.338-07:00family visit
the gleam of the late light
on homema...<i>family visit<br />the gleam of the late light<br />on homemade chocolate</i><br /><br />to<br /><br /><i>surprise family visit<br />the late afternoon gleam<br />on homemade chocolate</i><br /><br />.Area 17https://www.blogger.com/profile/07472190637554124160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2659026536331999061.post-67511087113099027692009-08-09T17:07:07.085-07:002009-08-09T17:07:07.085-07:00It was yummy chocolate made by my wife. Much bett...It was yummy chocolate made by my wife. Much better, and cheaper than shop bought, which is often a few months old from a factory. ;-)Area 17https://www.blogger.com/profile/07472190637554124160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2659026536331999061.post-76414472118982559922009-08-09T14:10:43.918-07:002009-08-09T14:10:43.918-07:00good one alan
johngood one alan<br />johnJohn McDonaldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02306609410526737715noreply@blogger.com