tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2659026536331999061.post8708049878937791632..comments2023-06-24T03:33:29.854-07:00Comments on Summer Haiku 2009: HumidityRachel Greenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13048590167153841615noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2659026536331999061.post-20561081398517125032009-07-24T05:34:11.373-07:002009-07-24T05:34:11.373-07:00It's one of those 'quiet' haiku that w...It's one of those 'quiet' haiku that with more readings becomes obvious to us that it is a fine poem.<br /><br />There is a heck of a lot going on behind the scenes (negative space technique).<br /><br />It's a very fine haiku, thoughtfully crafted.<br /><br />AlanArea 17https://www.blogger.com/profile/07472190637554124160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2659026536331999061.post-5151366977334139932009-07-24T05:18:00.138-07:002009-07-24T05:18:00.138-07:00The more I read, the more I fall in love with this...The more I read, the more I fall in love with this. Thanks for sharing, Laure..Wahyu W. Basjirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04260428377205211034noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2659026536331999061.post-57010935858389028432009-07-23T07:43:57.141-07:002009-07-23T07:43:57.141-07:00I love the specifics in this, makes it very real. ...I love the specifics in this, makes it very real. <br /><br />AlanArea 17https://www.blogger.com/profile/07472190637554124160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2659026536331999061.post-24931990413432245742009-07-22T14:22:31.181-07:002009-07-22T14:22:31.181-07:00How do you do it! ;-)
Wonderful haiku, wonderful ...How do you do it! ;-)<br /><br />Wonderful haiku, wonderful train haiku!<br /><br />Such economy, understatement, says so much. <br /><br />Thank you!Area 17https://www.blogger.com/profile/07472190637554124160noreply@blogger.com