tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2659026536331999061.post8868285562019330425..comments2023-06-24T03:33:29.854-07:00Comments on Summer Haiku 2009: Rachel Greenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13048590167153841615noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2659026536331999061.post-87542887472872358292009-07-06T15:35:28.765-07:002009-07-06T15:35:28.765-07:00I always wanted to go out west. Beautiful country ...I always wanted to go out west. Beautiful country and interesting history with a nice haibun, Nora.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2659026536331999061.post-42365167850587342652009-06-13T07:51:13.792-07:002009-06-13T07:51:13.792-07:00Hi again, in response to David, it is always inte...Hi again, in response to David, it is always interesting to see the possible variations on a theme, in this particular case, though, my personal opinion is the haiku is perfect as it is. <br />Let us all try some haibun and tanka too.Beatrice Vhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09492224274542764248noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2659026536331999061.post-25517247432183134172009-06-13T01:04:39.398-07:002009-06-13T01:04:39.398-07:00a delightful one nora
johna delightful one nora<br />johnJohn McDonaldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02306609410526737715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2659026536331999061.post-43998655184305047582009-06-13T00:13:39.736-07:002009-06-13T00:13:39.736-07:00i like this a lot Nora. however given the context ...i like this a lot Nora. however given the context how about<br /><br />homesick -<br />hungry only for sego liles<br />among sage brushDavidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14343643387576533616noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2659026536331999061.post-56520126926812613582009-06-12T23:37:30.031-07:002009-06-12T23:37:30.031-07:00I love this Nora.I love this Nora.Beatrice Vhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09492224274542764248noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2659026536331999061.post-59502144565694082702009-06-12T20:11:47.984-07:002009-06-12T20:11:47.984-07:00The description makes the whole piece feel more so...The description makes the whole piece feel more soothing than if the three lines had stood alone. How interesting what a difference the provision of context can make for the reader's experience.<br /><br />Very pretty.diana l.https://www.blogger.com/profile/12508598285292827626noreply@blogger.com