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Thursday, June 18, 2009


can't seem to stay grounded
heat lightning strikes again

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3 comments:

Pan Haiku Review said...

I really really really like this.

I just wonder if it could do with a very two word short first line?

June 20, 2009
diana l. said...

Thanks, Alan. Just thought I'd play around with that two line thing...

June 20, 2009
Pan Haiku Review said...

And I think you've done it!

I was just thinking out aloud. ;-)

June 21, 2009

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