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Thursday, July 2, 2009

on the patio
a warm teacup half empty
and the rocking chair


To Diana: Thx for the grammatical correction.

3 comments:

John McDonald said...

love it
john

Pan Haiku Review said...

I like the idea, but wonder if...

on the patio
the half empty teacup
and a rocking chair


maybe?

diana l. said...

Lovely. I'd like to be there right now. (I agree that "on" is more grammatically correct than "in".)