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Sunday, July 12, 2009

Standing in the doorway--
Dark silhouette of a man;
Fireflies glitter.
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1 comment:

Pan Haiku Review said...

I really like this!

I feel you can do away from using so much uppercase letters, they can sometimes make you think it's an acrostic poem.

Maybe even consider swapping lines around?

e.g.

fireflies glitter–
standing in the doorway
the silhouette of a man

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July 13, 2009

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