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succeeding season
Autumn 2009 @ our new website The Four Seasons of Haiku

Monday, June 15, 2009

the bush heavy

with pink - the pink

heavy with bees

ruffled clouds

in my confusion

sky looks like sea


Shelley said...

Yay, Jem, so pleased to see you here!

I especially like the repetition of "heavy" in the first one -- petals and bumblebees each have a kind of specific gravity, don't they?

Hope you'll share lots more...

nora said...

I really love the first one, Jem!

Ashi said...

As Shelley and Nora, the first part is a good one. Going from bush to bees by heavy pink is fantastic.
To mistake sky and sea though I can easily understand too :)