Summer Haiku 2009

Monday, June 15, 2009

the bush heavy

with pink - the pink

heavy with bees

ruffled clouds

in my confusion

sky looks like sea

Shelley said...: Yay, Jem, so pleased to see you here!

I especially like the repetition of "heavy" in the first one -- petals and bumblebees each have a kind of specific gravity, don't they?

Hope you'll share lots more...; June 15, 2009
nora said...: I really love the first one, Jem!; June 15, 2009
Ashi said...: As Shelley and Nora, the first part is a good one. Going from bush to bees by heavy pink is fantastic.
To mistake sky and sea though I can easily understand too :); June 15, 2009