the bush heavy
with pink - the pink
heavy with bees
in my confusion
sky looks like sea
Yay, Jem, so pleased to see you here!I especially like the repetition of "heavy" in the first one -- petals and bumblebees each have a kind of specific gravity, don't they?Hope you'll share lots more...
I really love the first one, Jem!
As Shelley and Nora, the first part is a good one. Going from bush to bees by heavy pink is fantastic.To mistake sky and sea though I can easily understand too :)
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