I like this as the author readily admitted being a fool making light of the situation even as his relationship with a loved one evidently gets sour. Acknowledgement of one's fault is the first step to reconciliation, so there might still be a happy ending...
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this poem is so beautifully done...
Love this one Diana l. even eroding :)
Unusual, deep and colourful at the same time, I love it
YES!!!!
terrific one
john
Thank you so much, everyone. (It's not every day that I write something I really like and then this is externally validated!) :)
I like this as the author readily admitted being a fool making light of the situation even as his relationship with a loved one evidently gets sour. Acknowledgement of one's fault is the first step to reconciliation, so there might still be a happy ending...
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