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Thursday, June 11, 2009


I was the fool
who stood laughing in the rain
as love eroded

7 comments:

Yansidara said...

this poem is so beautifully done...

Ashi said...

Love this one Diana l. even eroding :)

Beatrice V said...

Unusual, deep and colourful at the same time, I love it

Reihaisha said...

YES!!!!

John McDonald said...

terrific one
john

diana l. said...

Thank you so much, everyone. (It's not every day that I write something I really like and then this is externally validated!) :)

Vic Gendrano said...

I like this as the author readily admitted being a fool making light of the situation even as his relationship with a loved one evidently gets sour. Acknowledgement of one's fault is the first step to reconciliation, so there might still be a happy ending...