Thanks for both your comments diana l. and Jenn. You say it hits the mark, Jenn. How so? What do you think of this Jenn:
Da Lat Christmas up and down the tree fireflies
I thought this was one of my better attempts. Yet, no one commented on it. It takes place in Viet Nam during Christmas. I have never been to Nam but I read about this happening and it struck me as an incredible experience. Can you please explain to me, if you don't mind, why you like it or dislike it.
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I love it. :)
That is great! So many poems posted don't quite make the mark! Well done.
Thanks for both your comments diana l. and Jenn. You say it hits the mark, Jenn. How so? What do you think of this Jenn:
Da Lat Christmas
up and down the tree
fireflies
I thought this was one of my better attempts. Yet, no one commented on it. It takes place in Viet Nam during Christmas. I have never been to Nam but I read about this happening and it struck me as an incredible experience. Can you please explain to me, if you don't mind, why you like it or dislike it.
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