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Thursday, June 4, 2009

midday sun -
islands of shadow -
retreat into dark trees
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3 comments:

Area 17 said...

I like this!

I wonder two things:

1) name the island possibly?
2) alter 'under' to into or into the

midday sun -
island shadows retreat
into dark trees

midday sun -
island shadows retreat
into the dark trees

Alan
With Words

June 04, 2009
David said...

'into' is good Alan

cheers

June 04, 2009
diana l. said...

Reading backward from your more recent haiku, I'm beginning to detect an interest in the movement of light and shadow. Very nice.

June 06, 2009

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