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Thursday, June 4, 2009

midday sun -
islands of shadow -
retreat into dark trees

3 comments:

Alan Summers said...

I like this!

I wonder two things:

1) name the island possibly?
2) alter 'under' to into or into the

midday sun -
island shadows retreat
into dark trees


midday sun -
island shadows retreat
into the dark trees


Alan
With Words

David said...

'into' is good Alan

cheers

diana l. said...

Reading backward from your more recent haiku, I'm beginning to detect an interest in the movement of light and shadow. Very nice.