I really like the idea in this! This might work if the lines/themes were in different order, also. Flexible enough for many re-readings.
Lovely as always. My BD web page was removed by blogger. While I was ill it came under attack by malware. I have lost all of my poems.My new site is http://belovedhaikudreams.blogspot.comI can't remember all the sites I posted on. LOLlove, Melanie
Yes, I can experience what you wrote, B V. R K
thanks Nora, for the critique, good point, I have re-worked into something like this: A bright June skyshadows anticipate the night--the elusive moon
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