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A glimpse of the moon,

well hidden --in the brighteness

of a June sky

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4 comments:

Möme said...

I really like the idea in this! This might work if the lines/themes were in different order, also. Flexible enough for many re-readings.

Beloved Haiku Dreams said...

Lovely as always. My BD web page was removed by blogger. While I was ill it came under attack by malware. I have lost all of my poems.
My new site is http://belovedhaikudreams.blogspot.com
I can't remember all the sites I posted on. LOL

love, Melanie

R.K.SINGH said...

Yes, I can experience what you wrote, B V.

R K

Beatrice V said...

thanks Nora, for the critique, good point, I have re-worked into something like this: A

bright June sky

shadows anticipate the night

--the elusive moon