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A glimpse of the moon,
well hidden --in the brighteness
of a June sky
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Monday, June 1, 2009
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I really like the idea in this! This might work if the lines/themes were in different order, also. Flexible enough for many re-readings.
Lovely as always. My BD web page was removed by blogger. While I was ill it came under attack by malware. I have lost all of my poems.
My new site is http://belovedhaikudreams.blogspot.com
I can't remember all the sites I posted on. LOL
love, Melanie
Yes, I can experience what you wrote, B V.
R K
thanks Nora, for the critique, good point, I have re-worked into something like this: A
bright June sky
shadows anticipate the night
--the elusive moon
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