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Saturday, June 13, 2009

summer rain -
sudden sunlight
feeds a forest of ferns

3 comments:

diana l. said...

Nice alliteration! (Do you think the last line would be less cumbersome as "feeds a fern forest"?)

David said...

it is awkward I agree...... i'll think a bit

thanks though Diana

diana l. said...

I guess my phrase would change the meaning, wouldn't it? (unless, of course, you're writing from an ant's perspective!)