A lovely sadness. Again, the power is in the simplicity.
Wonderful.I don't feel you need to state the word 'summer':warm breezewanting to hear againmy name in your voice.
Alan and Nora,Another suggested first line:summer breezeA wistful and WARM longing of a not so secret desire to reconnect with a loved one...
Dear Vic,Yes, I like your new first line!'summer's' and 'warm' was too much, but your new version is even better than my suggestion! ;-)summer breezewanting to hear againmy name in your voiceI think that captures perfectly what you say in your prose statement. Another winner! ;-).
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