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Thursday, June 18, 2009


standing puddles -
unkept promises
to myself

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3 comments:

Beatrice V said...

I love this kind of implied ruefulness

June 18, 2009
diana l. said...

Thank you, Beatrice. (It's far more enjoyable in its poetic form than lived, however.)

June 18, 2009
Area 17 said...

I really like this.

There's something about that first line standing puddles that made me stop and read it again. Very original.

Here's a puddle haiku of mine. ;-)

arboretum
the only puddle I see
a kid in it

HI haiku magazine, Japan (2005)

June 19, 2009

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