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Thursday, June 11, 2009

(this is re-worked haiku, following Nora's critique of an earlier one, I feel it works better now)

Bright June sky,

shadows anticipate the night,

-the elusive moon

2 comments:

diana l. said...

Lovely. (Knew this was yours before I read your name!)

nora said...

Love it, Beatrice, though I don't remember a critique. Diana is right that your haiku are "signature," which is a very good thing.