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Monday, July 6, 2009

evening kimono
pools at my feet
i imagine your eyes
a fugue of stars
a world of forward glances.

6 comments:

Pamela A. Babusci said...

beautiful tanka, again!!
pamela

diana l. said...

This writing transports me. Thank you.

Area 17 said...

Wow!

My favourite lines:
a fugue of stars
and
a world of forward glances.

Wonderful poem!

John McDonald said...

wonderful
john

Reihaisha said...

thank you for such a telling and subdued piece

Laurie A. said...

Thank you all for encouraging me. I so appreciate your kindness.