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Saturday, July 25, 2009

morning shadows
and the remnants of the dew -
snails race the sun

4 comments:

Alan Summers said...

Actually you are right, snails do move fast! They are incredible creatures.

I think you could remove 'the' dew.

morning shadows
and the remnants of dew -
snails race the sun


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diana l. said...

This is wonderful! (Funny, I was going to suggest that you drop the "the" before "remnants"...)

Leatherdykeuk said...

thank you both - your help, appreciated.

John McDonald said...

terrific
john