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Monday, July 20, 2009

an orphan leaf
slithers with the evening wind

5 comments:

diana l. said...

I like "orphan", but "slithers" sounds a bit sinister. Is that what you intended?

Alan Summers said...

Really like this and the dynamics between "orphan" and "slithers" is wonderful! ;-)

Alan

martin said...

an orphan leaf crawls away in the moonlight

martin said...

evening wind
a leaf crawls away

Alan Summers said...

I love Martin's version as well, I feel really spoiled with both poems. What luxury. ;-)