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Thursday, July 2, 2009

summer thunderstorm
as lightening splits the night sky
the cats snuggle closer
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2 comments:

Pan Haiku Review said...

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Fantastic!


There's a spelling mistake, and you don't need to have "as" as it's subtly hinted at. ;-)


Just a suggestion.

summer thunderstorm
lightning splits a night sky
the cats snuggle closer

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July 03, 2009
diana l. said...

I was about to suggest the same thing regarding "as". A very cozy haiku.

July 03, 2009

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