.Fantastic! There's a spelling mistake, and you don't need to have "as" as it's subtly hinted at. ;-)Just a suggestion.summer thunderstormlightning splits a night skythe cats snuggle closer.
I was about to suggest the same thing regarding "as". A very cozy haiku.
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Fantastic!
There's a spelling mistake, and you don't need to have "as" as it's subtly hinted at. ;-)
Just a suggestion.
summer thunderstorm
lightning splits a night sky
the cats snuggle closer
.
I was about to suggest the same thing regarding "as". A very cozy haiku.
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