Hi Wahyu,I'd change it to:butterfly summer--yellow confettifalls from heavenall my best, keep posting wonderful poetry here! ;-)Alan
Lovely, Wahyu. Yes there is a mistyped error, 'confetti' is plural, from the Italian 'confetto' which is the singular. But I love the image it conveys, delightful
Thank you Alan and Beatrice. ;)
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Hi Wahyu,
I'd change it to:
butterfly summer--
yellow confetti
falls from heaven
all my best, keep posting wonderful poetry here! ;-)
Alan
Lovely, Wahyu. Yes there is a mistyped error, 'confetti' is plural, from the Italian 'confetto' which is the singular. But I love the image it conveys, delightful
Thank you Alan and Beatrice. ;)
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