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Thursday, July 23, 2009


butterfly summer--
yellow confetti
fall from heaven


Image source http://7art-screensavers.com/screenshots/butterfly/yellow-butterfly.jpg

3 comments:

Alan Summers said...

Hi Wahyu,

I'd change it to:

butterfly summer--
yellow confetti
falls from heaven


all my best, keep posting wonderful poetry here! ;-)

Alan

Beatrice V said...

Lovely, Wahyu. Yes there is a mistyped error, 'confetti' is plural, from the Italian 'confetto' which is the singular. But I love the image it conveys, delightful

Wandering spirit said...

Thank you Alan and Beatrice. ;)