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Monday, July 13, 2009

Yellow poppies,
their unblinking eyes
stare at the sun

4 comments:

Pan Haiku Review said...

I'd blink!

I really like this, very playful, and removed from shasei. Great!

nora said...

Lovely, Rachel. Watch the anthropomorphism. :-)

diana l. said...

What fun!

Rachel Green said...

Thank you :)

I always think of poppies as eyes with their long dark lashes.