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Wednesday, August 26, 2009


August evening -
a cool beer by looking for
the Great Bear


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soirée d'août -
une bière fraîche en cherchant
la Grande Ourse

1 comment:

Alan Summers said...

Hi Damien,

Love your haiku!

The French original looks better and I think the English version needs to move away from being a direct translation:

August evening -
a cool beer by looking for
the Great Bear


august evening -
a cool beer for looking
at the Great Bear



all my best,
Alan
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