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Saturday, August 1, 2009


wilting herbs

the glint of a knife leaves
a little mizzle

mizzle: http://www.thefreedictionary.com/mizzle

5 comments:

martin said...

wilting herbs
the glint of a knife leaves
a little mizzle

wilting herbs
the glint of a knife
left behind
???

John McDonald said...

nice one Alan
john

Alan Summers said...

Mine is definitly a work in progress. ;-)

martin said...

late night marsh smells
the mizzle between a jabberwocky’s toes

Alan Summers said...

Wow!

I think you can edit this slightly down to:

night marsh
the mizzle between a jabberwocky’s toes


What a fab haiku, a Japanese magazine would love this! Most Japanese haiku readers (and writers) love fairytales in their haiku.

Alan