.I love this!I do wonder if you can bring up the longer line so it's the middle line?dark rivera heart-breaking songfrom a bird(for Billie Holiday) all my best,AlanWith Words Online Haiku Competition Results.
what a gentle tribute to Billie Holliday!
it's lovely, John
Very lovely, John.
I like your tribute and Alan's suggestion.Summertime
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I love this!
I do wonder if you can bring up the longer line so it's the middle line?
dark river
a heart-breaking song
from a bird
(for Billie Holiday)
all my best,
Alan
With Words Online Haiku Competition Results
.
what a gentle tribute to Billie Holliday!
it's lovely, John
Very lovely, John.
I like your tribute and Alan's suggestion.
Summertime
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