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Tuesday, August 18, 2009

dog day afternoon
petal droops from rosebush
folks cross the street slowly

1 comment:

Alan Summers said...

Hi Reihaisha

dog day afternoon
petal droops from rosebush
folks cross the street slowly


I like this, but there is a lot going on, but what to drop and hint at with negative space? ;-)

folks across the street
a petal droops
from the rosebush


dropping rose petals
my neighbours
across the street


my neighbours
across the street
dropping rose petals


across the street
people
and a rose petal drops


people
across the street
the rose drops a petal