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Thursday, August 20, 2009

riverside trees
toppled -
fish through the branches

3 comments:

Reihaisha said...

fab imagery

Alan Summers said...

I agree with reihaisha!

riverside trees
toppled -
fish through the branches


Interesting middle line as it plays hard sounds against the lyricness and softness of those fantastic first and third lines.

Simply, and awesomely, utterly beautiful!!!!

all my best,
Alan
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martin said...

river snag
fish through the branches