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I agree with reihaisha!riverside treestoppled -fish through the branches Interesting middle line as it plays hard sounds against the lyricness and softness of those fantastic first and third lines.Simply, and awesomely, utterly beautiful!!!!all my best,AlanWith Words Online Haiku Competition Results.
river snagfish through the branches
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I agree with reihaisha!
riverside trees
toppled -
fish through the branches
Interesting middle line as it plays hard sounds against the lyricness and softness of those fantastic first and third lines.
Simply, and awesomely, utterly beautiful!!!!
all my best,
Alan
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river snag
fish through the branches
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