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Monday, August 3, 2009

rumpled roots
cradle a drift of petals

the wind shifts
geese carve the sky --

6 comments:

Dennis Tomlinson said...

I like the last line especiallly!

jem said...

I like the way the words 'cradle' and 'carve' seem to bounce off each other, both gentle but strong.

Kelly Marszycki said...

Thank you for your thoughts -- sometimes the words and images seem to flow; other times -- not! :~)

diana l. said...

Just lovely, Kelly. And I agree with Jem's comment.

diana l. said...

Just lovely, Kelly. And I agree with Jem's comment.

John McDonald said...

great stuff kelly
john