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Friday, August 28, 2009

twist of willow leaf
the thin limb --
homeless woman's stare

1 comment:

Alan Summers said...

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Hi Pearl,

That first line is fantastic! ;-)

I'm intrigued by the middle line and wonder if it can be brought further into the poem?


twist of willow leaf
the thin limb --
homeless woman's stare


e.g.

twist of willow leaf
the thin limb of the woman
and (her) homeless stare


twist of willow leaf
the thin limb of the woman
her homeless stare


all my best,
Alan
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