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Friday, August 28, 2009

twist of willow leaf
the thin limb --
homeless woman's stare
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Area 17 said...

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Hi Pearl,

That first line is fantastic! ;-)

I'm intrigued by the middle line and wonder if it can be brought further into the poem?


twist of willow leaf
the thin limb --
homeless woman's stare

e.g.

twist of willow leaf
the thin limb of the woman
and (her) homeless stare

twist of willow leaf
the thin limb of the woman
her homeless stare

all my best,
Alan
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