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Friday, June 19, 2009

crescent moon
trembled and shuddered in bed
:breeze over the pond

3 comments:

David said...

how about

cresent moon
trembling -
a breeze over the pond

best wishes

David

Wandering spirit said...

Thx, Dave.

diana l. said...

I don't know --- I kind of liked "shuddered" as well. Either way, makes me think, which I always enjoy.