I really like this. I wonder if an indefinite article might work?deserted park--a wooden bench succumbsto the moonlight.
Yippeee...Thx, Alan! I think it really works and makes the image much stronger..
.I really like the use of 'succumbs'; it's a well-judged choice of verb that adds layers of possible meanings and happenstances.
I like the words deserted and old here - aloneness and advanced age finally rewarded with a glimmer of hope.
I liked all of those words, and really enjoy your interpretations, Vic!
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