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Friday, June 19, 2009

evening drive
fog spilling from the pallisades
gulls swooping through

1 comment:

Alan Summers said...

What a marvellously evocative haiku, packed with atmosphere!

I still feel it's not quite in its final draft version, but it's close! ;-)

weblink: Palisades

You might consider dropping out one of the 'ings' and "telling the truth as if it's a lie" (grin):



evening drive
fog spills from the palisades
swooping out gulls