Terrific couple of lines: a fast car speeding throughthe curved airAlan
Thank you Alan. I am not happy with the first line, though..
I, too, like the last two lines a lot. Keep reworking the first line -- perhaps replacing "interstate" with more descriptive words...
Can you describe in just a basic prose description what you saw, and mean, by that first line?Don't do anything else yet, just that. all my best,Alan
What about this, guys?long empty road--a fast car speeding throughthe curved air
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