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Tuesday, June 9, 2009

morning drive
single raindrop drifts slowly
down the windshield

4 comments:

Alan Summers said...

I really like this!

You do have a typo so I hope you come back to correct it. ;-)

e.g.

morning drive
a single raindrop drifts slowly
down the windshield


Although you don't need 'single' I rather like it for the rhythm of the piece.
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Reihaisha said...

Alan, I did and thank you ;)

Alan Summers said...

Can't see the correction yet, but looking forward to it as this is a gooooooooooood haiku. ;-)

Don't forget to consider the indefinite article, and to correct the spelling of winshield to windshield. ;-)

morning drive
a single raindrop drifts slowly
down the windshield


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Beatrice V said...

Lovely Reihaisha, your haiku are showing a lovely growth and maturity, it is as if all of a sudden they blossomed in a special way this spring. Hope you will be sending some fo the anthology.