Another one I really like from you! ;-)I just feel it lacks a definite article to have it run smoother.e.g.afternoon breakhoneysuckle waftinginto the welding roomafternoon breaka little honeysuckle waftsinto the welding room.
Nice. (If this is written from life experience, be sure to talk to my husband next time you see us about recent research he's done on the dangers of breathing in welding fumes...)
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