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Tuesday, June 9, 2009

afternoon break
honeysuckle wafting
into welding room

2 comments:

Alan Summers said...

Another one I really like from you! ;-)

I just feel it lacks a definite article to have it run smoother.

e.g.

afternoon break
honeysuckle wafting
into the welding room


afternoon break
a little honeysuckle wafts
into the welding room


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diana l. said...

Nice. (If this is written from life experience, be sure to talk to my husband next time you see us about recent research he's done on the dangers of breathing in welding fumes...)