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Tuesday, June 9, 2009

afternoon break
honeysuckle wafting
into welding room
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2 comments:

Area 17 said...

Another one I really like from you! ;-)

I just feel it lacks a definite article to have it run smoother.

e.g.

afternoon break
honeysuckle wafting
into the welding room

afternoon break
a little honeysuckle wafts
into the welding room

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June 10, 2009
diana l. said...

Nice. (If this is written from life experience, be sure to talk to my husband next time you see us about recent research he's done on the dangers of breathing in welding fumes...)

June 10, 2009

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