Ow.
How tragic
Very impressive sting in the tail. Congratulations.
Very sad, and haunting. If this is an experiential haiku my heart goes out the parents.This haiku reminds me of Chiyo-ni's sad poem about her son.all my very best,Alan
Thank you so very much everybody. And Alan, this is based on a true incident which had me write many poems about it, both haiku and haiga and even haibun. I'll tell you the whole story later.
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Ow.
How tragic
Very impressive sting in the tail. Congratulations.
Very sad, and haunting. If this is an experiential haiku my heart goes out the parents.
This haiku reminds me of Chiyo-ni's sad poem about her son.
all my very best,
Alan
Thank you so very much everybody. And Alan, this is based on a true incident which had me write many poems about it, both haiku and haiga and even haibun. I'll tell you the whole story later.
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