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Monday, June 29, 2009

out from the mist
a swan
forming

7 comments:

Ashi said...

as HC Andersen says "from ugly duckling come a Swane" - nice one John

Gwil W said...

strong, classic, ancient image with splendid use of 'from' (as opposed to 'of') for the echo

Paul Smith said...

Fantastic John.

David said...

Yes!!

Area 17 said...

I like the way you broke this broke this up into three lines.

I also agree with Ashi and HC Andersen. Reminds me I was involved with HCA2005 in Britain (Hans Christian Andersen Bicentennial celebrations).

HC Andersen is probably one of the planet's greatest writers but English-language versions do't do his novels, stories and fables justice.

Charles Dickens was in awe of this man, and HC probably inspired Dickens to be a fine performance artist of his own stories.

all my best,

Alan

nora said...

Exquisite, John! I like this "swan period" of yours. ;-)

diana l. said...

Just lovely! I am transported.