I wanted to write a London haiku!
And you did! Love to see more. Please! ;-)Can I suggest an edited version of the first line?I think the last two lines are fantastic! A blaze of colour and sound!!!weak sunshinehorse chestnut leaves waggleover a red bus.
what is a waggle?
It's "chestnut leaves" waggle, and the definition of waggle (as a verb): waggleNow it's a pity you can't drink waggle dance which is a bitter. ;-)
Thanks for your appreciation, Alan. And your emendation places a stronger emphasis on the funny 'waggling' of the leaves in the second line.
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