I wonder if you could experiment swapping the line order?gulmohar treea girl with lilacawaits a rickshawwikipedia weblink: gulmohar tree.
This definitely reads better, Alan.I was aware that my version had something which needed to be changed, but I couldn't do it, despite my several attempts. Perhaps it was because I was stuck with "under the gulomohar tree". By dropping the preposition, you have achieved what I could not. Thank you very much.R K
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