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Wednesday, July 1, 2009


blinded again
by uncompromising rain
and these weak wipers

2 comments:

Alan Summers said...

I love "uncompromising rain" !

blinded again
the uncompromising rain
beats the weak wipers


Perhaps you could use the first line for a juxtaposed new image?

new (concrete) image
the uncompromising rain
beats the weak wipers


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diana l. said...

Thank you, Alan, for your feedback and suggestions. I did consider replacing "by" with "the".