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Wednesday, July 1, 2009


blinded again
by uncompromising rain
and these weak wipers

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2 comments:

Area 17 said...

I love "uncompromising rain" !

blinded again
the uncompromising rain
beats the weak wipers

Perhaps you could use the first line for a juxtaposed new image?

new (concrete) image
the uncompromising rain
beats the weak wipers

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July 02, 2009
diana l. said...

Thank you, Alan, for your feedback and suggestions. I did consider replacing "by" with "the".

July 02, 2009

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