Wow!This is very good haiku even just taking in account "the top layer of meaning", but takes on a lot more significance when you think Christian dominated countries have sent in military aircraft to attack muslim countries such as Iraq and Afghanisation.It brings up the old crusades to a contemporary era.An excellent "show don't tell" political haiku.Alan
Just like to say again how good this haiku is.Alan
Thank you Alan.Your assistance as I struggle with the form is appreciated.
It's just a fine haiku, which is why I commented twice. ;-)I'd consider adding this to another 4 or 5 haiku and submit them, maybe Heron's Nest?Alan
Exquisite! Amazingly layered for such a brief piece.
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