So you use gardening in this way, too!Very nice.(How about replacing "and" with a comma and "to" with "I"? Although I think that neither of these suggestions is very traditional haiku...yet I like the way they sound:))
My version:early morningI pull weeds and deadhead shrubsto center myself Diana's version:early morningpulling weeds, deadheading shrubsI center myselfI definitely prefer Diana's version!..
after the last few weeks I had, I needed to destress badly.I was focusing on the acts of gardening not myself. That is why I did not use "I" in the third line. I do like Diana's second line though....
Thanks. I was thinking the same thing about the "I". It sort of imports the west into the east, doesn't it?
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