How do you do it! ;-)Wonderful haiku, wonderful train haiku!Such economy, understatement, says so much. Thank you!
I love the specifics in this, makes it very real. Alan
The more I read, the more I fall in love with this. Thanks for sharing, Laure..
It's one of those 'quiet' haiku that with more readings becomes obvious to us that it is a fine poem.There is a heck of a lot going on behind the scenes (negative space technique).It's a very fine haiku, thoughtfully crafted.Alan
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