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Wednesday, July 22, 2009

Humidity

humidity
the sound of a train
two miles west

4 comments:

Alan Summers said...

How do you do it! ;-)

Wonderful haiku, wonderful train haiku!

Such economy, understatement, says so much.

Thank you!

Alan Summers said...

I love the specifics in this, makes it very real.

Alan

Wandering spirit said...

The more I read, the more I fall in love with this. Thanks for sharing, Laure..

Alan Summers said...

It's one of those 'quiet' haiku that with more readings becomes obvious to us that it is a fine poem.

There is a heck of a lot going on behind the scenes (negative space technique).

It's a very fine haiku, thoughtfully crafted.

Alan