This one makes me smile diana
Thanks, David. (We ate it for lunch on the last day of our recent camping trip - and my youngest (who, of course, was the fisherman) suddenly developed a deep and abiding love for the taste of sunfish!)
I feel there is some ambiguity here, the snagged fish sparkles - caught in a not so happy situation; the angler's smile is a happy one -from a sense of achievement. Interesting; it may even make a superb tanka if you added a surprise 'conclusion" to the riddle. Good one, Diana.
I think Beatrice is right, this is begging to be a tanka.Go for it Diana! ;-)
Mmmmm. I'll have to think about that. Thank you both for the encouragement to expand.
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