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Saturday, July 11, 2009

payment for yesterday's sun:
Blackberry flowers are whiter
than today's clouds

5 comments:

John McDonald said...

good one
john

Alan Summers said...

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Wonderful, fresh and unique!!!!

I don't feel you need an upper case letter after the colon, unless you mean the Blackberry cellphone?

payment for yesterday's sun:
blackberry flowers are whiter
than today's clouds


I absolutely adore this haiku!

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Beatrice V said...

Lovely!

martin said...

Wouldn’t – blackberry flowers whiter than today’s clouds – be enough?

Alan Summers said...

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Martin could be right, I was just thinking of the middle line being longer so e.g.

payment for yesterday's sun:
blackberry flowers whiter
than today’s clouds


???
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