.Wonderful, fresh and unique!!!!I don't feel you need an upper case letter after the colon, unless you mean the Blackberry cellphone?payment for yesterday's sun:blackberry flowers are whiterthan today's clouds I absolutely adore this haiku!.
Wouldn’t – blackberry flowers whiter than today’s clouds – be enough?
.Martin could be right, I was just thinking of the middle line being longer so e.g.payment for yesterday's sun:blackberry flowers whiter than today’s clouds???.
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