payment for yesterday's sun:
Blackberry flowers are whiter
than today's clouds
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5 comments:
good one
john
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Wonderful, fresh and unique!!!!
I don't feel you need an upper case letter after the colon, unless you mean the Blackberry cellphone?
payment for yesterday's sun:
blackberry flowers are whiter
than today's clouds
I absolutely adore this haiku!
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Lovely!
Wouldn’t – blackberry flowers whiter than today’s clouds – be enough?
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Martin could be right, I was just thinking of the middle line being longer so e.g.
payment for yesterday's sun:
blackberry flowers whiter
than today’s clouds
???
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