summer stigmata
everyday she wears
a new bite
with a shimmer
ants ascend - above
the gulls circle
I particularly like the first one, Jem. A very common experience!
good stuff jemjohn
I really like that first one too.It's very strong. A lot of good haiku are like this, not afraid to do something contemporary on a tough subject.It has a lot of layers to it, whether it's to do with self-harm (extremely common nowadays) or religious beliefs.all my best,Alan
I love the first one and just have to share it with my poor husband who struggles throughout the summer with this fate.
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I particularly like the first one, Jem. A very common experience!
good stuff jem
john
I really like that first one too.
It's very strong. A lot of good haiku are like this, not afraid to do something contemporary on a tough subject.
It has a lot of layers to it, whether it's to do with self-harm (extremely common nowadays) or religious beliefs.
all my best,
Alan
I love the first one and just have to share it with my poor husband who struggles throughout the summer with this fate.
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