Nice one - that last line is a treat!
I agree with jem! ;-)across the deer parkpatches of mist –the ghosts of dawn You could make "across the deer park" into a pivot line? e.g.the ghosts of dawnacross the deer parkpatches of mist orpatches of mistacross the deer parkthe ghosts of dawn Alan
Just beautiful, David!
very good Davidjohn
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