.I love it! Superbly underplayed, and beautifully understated.You allow the reader to enjoy the humour, and the sensations, in their own way without being "instructed" to read it "the poet's way".You are a very open poet for readers.This haiku has other layers of meaning, and worth reading more than twice.Another haiku that should go into a collection or anthology!My only two very minor suggestions on amending/editing the haiku are purely on plural and possessive grounds, merely technical and therefore minor:fromhigh grasses -an ant in the jungleof my leg's hairsto:high grass -an ant in the jungleof my leg hairsYou are one of my favourite English-language haiku poets, when is a collection out!!! ;-)all my best,AlanWith Words Online Haiku Competition Results.
Oooh. Itchy. Wonderfully funny and tactile.
Once again, all my thanks for your comment and your attention : you make me redden and I think your compliments are too kind !Of course, I agree with your suggestions and change my post to improve my haikuall my best
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